strawberry saliva

Generally, I thought I was a very moving piece. I may be swayed by the fact that I can almost relate to what you are talking about...but that's gotta be ...

First i read through your poem really quick because the whole (alcohol), (nicotine) thing was confusing :shock: but when i got to the end and found myself really really confused ...

this poem is deep although i'm not very sure what it is about. i have never been good at interpreting poetry. i had to comment on your poem because i ...

it was good, save for the few punctuation mistakes. but what am i saying, read my "all about dark holes" i've got quite a few spelling and gramatical errors on ...